Poem: Dreams…

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Lying in bed

The window open wide

Rays of gold from the lamps

Dance frenetically inside

The flow of a nearby river

Hums sweetly in my ear

As I stare at the ceiling

Filled with moonlight care

My eyelids drum against each other

Joining with the whispers of the wind

The stars blink with love for me

As the night begins to sing

Turning the canvas of darkness

To a heavenly scene

Whisking me away

To the land of dreams

H. R Phoenix

11/ 04 / 2020

Published by H.R Phoenix, Author

H.R Phoenix is the creator of Penable. She likes to inspire people to write and is an author, editor, proofreader and illustrator. She is currently working on her mystery/thriller debut novel. When she's not working on a short story or writing awesome Penable Posts, she enjoys spending time painting, reading or hanging out with her two cute kittens...

11 thoughts on “Poem: Dreams…”

  1. “Whisking me away
    To the land of dreams”
    Can I just say that…this is just soooooo calming I can feel myself drifting to dreamland…the magical vibe and words flowing smoothly like falling snow…woah it’s a really beautiful poem💝💝💝

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  5. You are an amazing poet Phoenix!!!! You must try your luck at publishing it as a whole. I am sure that you have a large collection of it. Or have you published any already?

    Liked by 1 person

  7. No I haven’t. But I dream of. And I am working on it. All the best. I am sure it will be a success.
    And I have published the new post regarding the blogger award. Do check it out.

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  9. I love every line.. Your powerful use of imagery got me doing what you were saying in this poem. For example when I got to this line..

    …..As I stare at the ceiling

    Filled with moonlight care

    My eyelids drum against each other

    I practically blinked my eyes severally which is in line with your description (eyelids Drum against each other)

    Also this line
    …..The flow of a nearby river

    Hums sweetly in my ear

    Creates a vivid imagery and I can’t help but imagine flowing river with the sound it makes when the water flow.

    Thanks for sharing this amazing work!

    Liked by 1 person

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