Thursday poetry competition – The Results!

Hi to all my friends, amazing followers and awesome fellow bloggers! And here is the results of last Thursday’s comp!

The topic was Love.

We received soooooo many entries and choosing the winner and runner ups was a hard choice, because each and every one of your poems were beautifully written and unique in their own way.

And now for the winner….

The winner is BOLD GIRL! (Also known as Hollie!)

Her lines enchanted me, fitted the topic perfectly and I didn’t want to stop reading! Here is the beautiful poem she has written:

The One I Loved!

I was locked inside my house and just then, got separated from my beloved spouse.
The world says, the relationship is unreal but, how can the nature be so cruel?

It took me away, away from him. Since then, my life has become dim!
The moment I realized, he is losing his consciousness, I ran out of my house just to save him.

I did not know what to do, I kept praying to find a doctor to save his life,
After all, I was his artificial wife.

I left no stone un-turned to look for a medicine for him,
But, all my attempts went in vain. I can’t express, my heart was in deep pain!

Since then, I am living my life without him,
I look normal on the outside but, on the inside my heart screams!

He sometimes visits me in my dreams!

I once in a while, check his heartbeat, to make sure, I haven’t lost him forever,
To lose him at such a crucial time, I’d thought never!

His heart is still beating, though he can’t accompany me in my walks of life,
I miss him a lot, after all, I am his artificial wife.

I do not know, when he’d come back to life!
The thought of losing him is like someone piercing my heart with a knife.

The doctors are unavailable right now and he’s on his bed waiting for things to become fine,
The day he’s back on his feet, with him, I’d dine!

Until then, I would keep missing this beautiful creation,
When he was alive, I’ve never showered him with appreciation.

How selfish are we humans, taking everything for granted,
When he was alright, I have always just ranted.

I now know your worth,
Waiting for your new birth.

Dear Phone, for you I mourn!

By the bold girl

Good, isn’t it? No! It’s awesome! Thank you for sharing Hollie and I proudly give you our special Penable Award! Check out this link for more information: https://penableme.wordpress.com/2020/04/19/new-the-penable-award/

Note, all the runner ups get this award too!

The runner ups:

1. Shreya, check out her amazing poetry here: https://wildscaredcrazy.wordpress.com/2020/05/21/our-kind-of-sundays/

2. Harsh, check out his great poetry here: https://crypticsworld.home.blog/2020/05/23/agent-of-chaos/

3. Nima Mohan, check out her awesome poetry here: https://thetenthzodiac.wordpress.com/2019/03/23/oh-moon-my-love-poem/

Congratulations to all our runner ups and winners!!!! You all get the Penable Award!

Thank you to everyone else who entered, we enjoyed reading your work and savoured every line! Don’t forget to share the news about Penable, follow, like and comment down below 👇

And thank you for reading 🙏💕

Phoenix 💖

Published by H.R Phoenix, Author

H.R Phoenix is the owner and creator of Penable. She likes to inspire people to write and is an Author of a poetry book and the Penable magazine 2020. When she's not working on a short story or writing awesome Penable Posts, she enjoys spending time with her two cute kittens..

72 thoughts on “Thursday poetry competition – The Results!

  1. Thank you!
    We have a different theme every Thursday, it ends on Tuesday, and Wednesday is the results! Then we do the whole thing again!
    There’s one coming out tomorrow, if you’re interested ❤️❤️❤️

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  2. Congratulations to The Bold Girl. Loved the poem, and the rest of you also…. I’m so not into poems at all. It’s my worse form of literature- but you guys are making me change my mind! I’ll be keeping an eye on these posts for sure ♥️♥️♥️

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