Thursday Poetry Competition – The Results..

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Hi everyone, it’s Phoenix and here are the results for last week’s conp!

This time, our competition was judged by an amazing fellow blogger, Zamadlomo! Thank you so much Zamadlomo!!

Lots of you took part in last week’s comp and the topic was storms.

And now for the winner….

The winner is.. Kim from Kimmagic!

Congratulations! Here is what she wrote..

An Encounter With The Waterdrops

I stepped out onto the cold crying street,
And stomped my large heavy feet,
I lifted my head and looked up high,
At the sun-kissed sky,
Weighing down,
The sky began to frown,

And what happened then, I cannot explain,
It was so stunning and yet insane,
The sky was wetted with a stain,
I wondered, was it a stain that would remain??

The sun fled away,
All of a sudden it began to spray,
Water came falling,
I was left appalling,
I’m afraid this world might drown,
Why is the sky flooding our town??

I’ve seen the sun, the moon, the day, and night,
But what was this mysterious sight,
Water is plummeting down to the ground,
Every place I seek, there are drops around,
Water splashes on me, I am drenched,
Is it the earthly land’s thirst that must be quenched??

O Mother earth, may the trickling water replenish you,
She shall emerge brand new,
As for the sky, the town and me,
We are rinsed in water as salty as the sea,
Does god feel the need to release his power,
And cleanse our impurities with a shower??

I wander the streets till the bathing is done,
Now the sky’s illuminated with the returning sun,
What was this dribbling water, I say aloud,
And how must it leak from a fluffy light cloud??
A young man passes by the empty domain,
He says, you must be talking about the rain,

What a name,
Rain,
It’s over now, such a shame,
Will I ever meet it again??

By Kim

Great job and you get the Penable Award!

And now for the runner ups who also get the Penable Award:

1. ERA! Congratulations! Check out her amazing piece here.

2. RISHIKA JAIN! Congratulations! Check out her beautiful piece here.

3. NIMA MOHAN! Congratulations! Check out her awesome piece here.

Thank you to everyone else who entered, we loved each and every piece of work!

And thank you so much for reading! And join us every Thursday for another Poetry Competition!

Also, if you want to judge a Thursday Poetry competition, please contact me at: penableme@gmail.com. The same goes to any inquiries you may have!

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Published by H.R Phoenix, Author

H.R Phoenix is the creator of Penable. She likes to inspire people to write and is an author, editor, proofreader and illustrator. She is currently working on her mystery/thriller debut novel. When she's not working on a short story or writing awesome Penable Posts, she enjoys spending time painting, reading or hanging out with her two cute kittens...

36 thoughts on “Thursday Poetry Competition – The Results..”

  3. Thank you so much for such an honoring opportunity Phoenix, I got exposed to such amazing talent! Wow

    Congratulations to all the winners! Your poems were really wonderful guys… Please don’t stop writing! 🙏🏽🌹🌺

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  9. Thanks a lot 💙💙, I don’t find enough words😃😃

    And congratulations Kim, M.I ( Rishika ) and Nima, your poems amazing as always 💕💕

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